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Love's not for everyone
Not meant to be.......
Time takes its toll, it passes so fast
luck comes sometimes but will not last.
When great things come it seems so real
but illusions can mask how you truely feel.
A beautiful smile with a sparkle in her eye
it gives you hope, and wills you to try
the spring in her step and sound of her laugh
clears your thoughts and hints on a path.
Then suddenly ruined by the words in your mind
you cannot win , you are falling behind,
history repeats like a deafening echo
the sories that were, bueried so deep
arises in dreams like a mysterious memo.
Pain can be handled, can be put aside
once is fine and and will pass with the tide
the second one hides like a bellowing wave
waiting to crash when you get too tame
Step into the shallow to re-think your shame,
ambushed from the side and shows you the grave
you escape in time reminded of the risk
your heart is broken and cannot be fixed.
Lonely is the path more traveled
its the safe road that keeps you sheltered
Love is the choice that can end your belief
it can mean the world or end up in grief,
look at your heart, take it off your sleeve
put it away and forget about you dreams
your misery will end after many a year
alsong as you sanity remains behind the tears.
the story will end, the book will close,
you live your life no longer exposed....
Time takes its toll, it passes so fast
luck comes sometimes but will not last.
When great things come it seems so real
but illusions can mask how you truely feel.
A beautiful smile with a sparkle in her eye
it gives you hope, and wills you to try
the spring in her step and sound of her laugh
clears your thoughts and hints on a path.
Then suddenly ruined by the words in your mind
you cannot win , you are falling behind,
history repeats like a deafening echo
the sories that were, bueried so deep
arises in dreams like a mysterious memo.
Pain can be handled, can be put aside
once is fine and and will pass with the tide
the second one hides like a bellowing wave
waiting to crash when you get too tame
Step into the shallow to re-think your shame,
ambushed from the side and shows you the grave
you escape in time reminded of the risk
your heart is broken and cannot be fixed.
Lonely is the path more traveled
its the safe road that keeps you sheltered
Love is the choice that can end your belief
it can mean the world or end up in grief,
look at your heart, take it off your sleeve
put it away and forget about you dreams
your misery will end after many a year
alsong as you sanity remains behind the tears.
the story will end, the book will close,
you live your life no longer exposed....
(2 year ago)
Hey, your poem is great. You clearly have a talent for writing!!!
Just wanted to share something with you...I have been seeing a guy for a couple of months and what you have written is...I'm pretty sure, exactly how he feels. I kind of feel like I"m that girl you're writing about. The thing is...I love him so much. He really has no idea, I try to tell him but it's as if he can't believe it, won't trust me. Just as you say in your poem, he is constantly flooded by the past.
From the other side though, I had to break up with him last night and I am such a mess right now, it was the last thing in the world I wanted to do but unless he can let go of things and believe in love again and take a chance, I will never have the opportunity to let my smile be his, the glimmer in my eye is for him. I take care to look nice so he will think I'm beautiful...I try to keep my heart soft so he can be safe in it but...my love for him just hasn't been enough. He thinks I am fake.
If you have a woman in your life who has a beautiful smile and a genuine glimmer in her eye...maybe it's because she is for real, and maybe she is for you. If you have stuff you need to deal with then...why not face it and start to believe that there are good things in store for your life. Lonely sux, and I truly believe it is better to have loved and lost than to have not loved at all. At least you have "felt" and "experienced". Surely, when the good things come along, the things you have been through in the past will make them even more valuable and special to you..like diamonds.
There is always hope and maybe this girl feels like me...all she wants to do is love you, hug you, kiss you and be with you. why not treat her like a princess because if she is anything like me with my guy...she wants to treat you like a king. Go see someone and go talk to this girl and be honest about things, if she has good character...she'll be willing to walk through things "with" you. Maybe you need to apologise....who knows, but please don't let this stuff rip you up and keep you bound when amazing things could be in front of you.
Life can be good and sometimes we are so blinded that we can't see when the greatest gift is being offered before us. Don't give up...:)
Just wanted to share something with you...I have been seeing a guy for a couple of months and what you have written is...I'm pretty sure, exactly how he feels. I kind of feel like I"m that girl you're writing about. The thing is...I love him so much. He really has no idea, I try to tell him but it's as if he can't believe it, won't trust me. Just as you say in your poem, he is constantly flooded by the past.
From the other side though, I had to break up with him last night and I am such a mess right now, it was the last thing in the world I wanted to do but unless he can let go of things and believe in love again and take a chance, I will never have the opportunity to let my smile be his, the glimmer in my eye is for him. I take care to look nice so he will think I'm beautiful...I try to keep my heart soft so he can be safe in it but...my love for him just hasn't been enough. He thinks I am fake.
If you have a woman in your life who has a beautiful smile and a genuine glimmer in her eye...maybe it's because she is for real, and maybe she is for you. If you have stuff you need to deal with then...why not face it and start to believe that there are good things in store for your life. Lonely sux, and I truly believe it is better to have loved and lost than to have not loved at all. At least you have "felt" and "experienced". Surely, when the good things come along, the things you have been through in the past will make them even more valuable and special to you..like diamonds.
There is always hope and maybe this girl feels like me...all she wants to do is love you, hug you, kiss you and be with you. why not treat her like a princess because if she is anything like me with my guy...she wants to treat you like a king. Go see someone and go talk to this girl and be honest about things, if she has good character...she'll be willing to walk through things "with" you. Maybe you need to apologise....who knows, but please don't let this stuff rip you up and keep you bound when amazing things could be in front of you.
Life can be good and sometimes we are so blinded that we can't see when the greatest gift is being offered before us. Don't give up...:)
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